The effect seemed too strong and out of place at first, because it shouldn't be done as much in the early section, up until around 0:58. After that it is fine.
Song would be better if it was normal up until that point, then changes to how that effect is now either at 0:58 or 1:28 or so.
The way it is now it gives away the surprise and sounds out of place as well.
You mean the pluck synth with the delay? So pretty much you just want the first 54 seconds to be the reverse guitar and bass fading in? I would get many more complaints if i did it that way, I assure you. But its still my first, so I'm learning as I go:) my next will be much better<3
Thank you for the criticism<3(:
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